
Hello people today I tell you a story, I hope that you enjoy it.
Once upon a time a girl, she is 16 years old and she moves to another city because her parents change of work, this city was very different to the other city where she was living, because this new city is most cold than the other city, but she believe that something interesting could happen… The first day of the high school she know two girls Jessica and Anna they are very nice and their present to Emma the other guys of the grade and they are very nice too, their names are Paul, Alex and Rob. Rob says to Emma: Have you seen the movie Twilight? And she says: Yes, I saw, but don’t worry you because I haven’t seen New moon, if you want we can go to see new moon tomorrow after the class and Rob says very excited of course that I want and they agreed to be in the cinema to the five o' clock. After of the movie they were to the café shop and she says to Rob: look there is a cake!, I’ll buy because I didn’t buy nothing to my mother that is of birthday today, though she thought this gift isn’t enough and she decide to buy a perfume too delicious and after they left to Emma’s house for celebrate to Emma’s mom.
Hi Nacha!
ReplyDeleteIs a very interesting story.
I feel that this
story is real o no??
Jajaja.....anyway, very
interesting.
Bye!
hi nacha, very good story, and very interesting, and very nice that emma found friends so quickly in the new city, that it's difficult for some people, see you...salutes.
ReplyDeleteHello Naxis!
ReplyDeleteIs a funny history and the events happen very quickly but in my opinion missed the romantic part :( However I really liked your story.
I feel that you wanted to leave the rest of the story to the imagination:) and this is very interesting because each gives his own ending.
Kisses! Take Care!
Bye naxita!
Brisa Jara R.
Comments:
ReplyDelete-this new city is COLDER THAN
-SHE BELIEVES
-the first day of school she MEETS
-THEY WENT TO THE CAFE
-I didn´t buy ANYTHING
-SHE DECIDES
IMPORTANT: you have to decide if you write the story in present or past
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